The Girl

This piece of writing is called show don't tell you express the characters feeling without saying "she was happy."lly out actually

Storming into the room, stomping my feet I could not believe what had happened that morning. My frown was almost touching the ground. “SCHOOL! I hate it, I hate it, I hate It. It gives me a, a disgusting taste in my mouth every time I step through that gate.” The costume had been perfect, well at least I thought it was perfect.Everybody was making fun of me, why? Slamming the door behind me “SMASH” my photo frame came off the wall. I don't care. I opened the cupboard and ripping everything out. Flopping onto my bed “I've had enough. they’re all bullies” raising one fist in the air “curse them!” I say. Waking up with bags under my eyes I look like a monster from the future. I was almost like a bomb waiting to blow up.

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